Loved

Truthfully, i don't care.

 

Loved

I love you.

I really do.

Baby,

You make me feel invincible.

Like I can encounter anything,

And still be victorious.

You showed me how to live life to the fullest and laugh,

And feel as though I’m in a whole other world,

That consists of just you and me.

 No one else is allowed to enter.

We hold the only keys,

That goes into the unbreakable lock,

To reveal that wonderful world…

 

In that world,

Angels sing,

Doves fly,

Waterfalls reflect the smiles in our eyes,

And the only thing that can bring harm is each other.

You’ll just need to trust me.

So take my hand,

We’ll make it…

I promise.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

The descriptions are great. The way you described the feelings in the first stanza is really good as if you're persuading someone to suddenly fall in love and experience the joy of it. In the second stanza, there you've described the place in such a vivid way. What I like about the place is the fact that it seems really perfect,
and harmless, as though nothing can ever hurt you there, yet still, the one person who makes that place something perfect is also the one who is capable of harming you. Great Irony. Good Job.

Keep Writing. ^___^ And Cheer Up.