Lost

This ios everything about me right now...im just very lost and confused...don't say anything bad, please...this actually came from me. I crossed out the word hate only because its too strong a word for me to use. I never do use it.

Where do I go?

Why am I lost?

So many things I once knew...

That once is gone.

I had control of my life,

Once upon at time.

Now I've lost the wheel,

And time is going to die.

Now there is no love,

There is only hate.

Let death be my fate.

Please some one guide me,

But don't stay beside me.

I want to try to find my own way.

I just want to see.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I really want help right now....

Reviews

[Dionysus Cain]

this hit all cylinders with me. this is a very strong poem and i have to admit it mademe reflect my journey up to this poem. you won't understand if someone guides you, your right,,, we are not lost , just exploring.. great write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bud]

Who would say anything bad about this? We all feel this way sometimes in our lives. Thank you for sharing what is truly yours alone to share...your inner most feelings. Great work! Keep writing!

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

I'm sorry, Janeene... V.V if you want me to go I will...

*kisses you very slowly on your lips, closes eyes, and feels something I will never feel again...*

I'm so sorry v.v
I do, and will always love you

[ALAN BOWMAN]

This is a really lovely poem. Help? Oh, I would say as an artist you probably like to change colours, identities, take a break from feeling stuk in one place. Poetry, Monty Python, w s o c r r d a mb les....;