Dream:chapter one

this was a dream. I had the first half then david had the second. how odd. this is the first half.

 

                       DREAMS

      CHAPTER 1: NON-REALITY

                      The girl sat deep in the dark corner of the new house. She was tall with blond hair. She wore a bright red shirt and black pants. Her name? Jennie. Jennie was…give or take sixteen years old and yes, lived in a house away from her parents. She left not so long ago.

                      A year before she left, she was a dark child. Most of her life was sad, and she had always tried to be happy. Why? Because everyone else was depressed about the most smallest things. She had a secret life behind the happiness.

                    Jennie was born in Florida, though her mom made her move and leave her father behind bars when she was half a year old. After that she live in Georgia, though left her Nana and cousin when she was three. All the rest of her life, she was happy. Or, her mother thought so.

                      Jennies mother had to work all the time. They lived in a big red house, and didn’t have much. The two silently lived with her great grandmother. Until she died. Then, Jennie’s life went down from there.

                               

Reviews

[Becca At The Disco.]

I like this so far!

[Kitsue]

Good story.

[Cคɾเ&#..]

I like this. Hah! Omg your character Jennie has the same name as m y Jenny in my book, hah! AND u said david had the second dream, and there's a David in my story.......hahaha, i need more.