When...

When...

A Poem by Tai-San
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This covers a few things on my life. not even half, but a few. It's killing me, just this much.

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When one knows her time has come,
She shall accept it.
When one knows another’s has come,
She shall fight it.
When one is into trouble,
She shall greet it with open arms.
When one finds someone that loves her,
She shall not fight.
 

© 2008 Tai-San


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On the contrary ATG, it depends on what culture you are from. When one is met with an irreversable end, it is much more poignant if you accept it with grace and dignity. You are loved, Janeene. Do not fight it, but rather fight for it. Do not hand death your eternal soul until it is truly time. Fight for love until the very end, I pray...

Posted 16 Years Ago


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ATG
It was an interesting. I agree with most of it except accepting ones death. You should never acept your own death. You should fight off death at every point.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Tai-San
Tai-San

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I am single and an age. I hate people, but I love them. I get scared very easily and, well, i wont say why. I'm a poet, though i'm bad at it. My best friends are: Wa Ya As The Gothic Cowboy, ATG, .. more..

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