Why?

A Poem by Tai-San

How could you do this,

Of all things said to do?

I had faith in you.

That stupid new girl,

Who goes out with you know who.

Shove her into the ground.

I hate you for this,

You.....ugh!

We had been friends for years, so i don't understand,

Why you take her side, instead of mine.

© 2008 Tai-San

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JRB

The poem showed hate and resentment, I only ask for what reason would you hate her, wish her harm, for his and your falling away from your start. Love lost, was never found, hate in the heart keeps the soul in the dark. Thank you for the read.
Jan/Uisiom

Posted 16 Years Ago

Wondering Mind

A good, raw, and heartfelt write. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago

ATG	This is a good poem. I can feel your pain from it. It was short and to the point. Posted 16 Years Ago This is a good poem. I can feel your pain from it. It was short and to the point. Rating /100

BEEGE

Good job.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
It was worded well enough that
I could feel the pain you were describing
in a way, kind of, sorta...lol.
Good job.

BeegE

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on October 15, 2008
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Author

Tai-San

New York

About

I am single and an age. I hate people, but I love them. I get scared very easily and, well, i wont say why. I'm a poet, though i'm bad at it. My best friends are: Wa Ya As The Gothic Cowboy, ATG, .. more..