Where Was I

My best friend passed two years ago by a drunk driver. I was supposed to be at her house, but i had summer school. this is about how i feel and how, at the last minute, she felt. it's extremely short......

Where was I when the sun rose?
Where was I? Nobody knows.
Where was I when the sun died?
I was waiting on the other side.

Author's Note

sorry...like i said, extremley short.

Reviews

[ATG]

It was a good poem. Very short, but very effective. I'm sorry to hear about your friend.

[Wondering Mind]

short but, very effective. I admire this style very much. An excellent expression of deep emotion in few but, very potent expresions.

[JRB]

So are you saying that you are dead already? NICE WORK

[Silver_Moon]

it is okay that it is short. The important thing is the feeling and the content in your poetry. In this, I could feel your sadness and hurt. I can't imagine myself if I am going to lose a friend. Good read though! Keep up the good work! :)