Where Was I

Where Was I

A Poem by Tai-San
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My best friend passed two years ago by a drunk driver. I was supposed to be at her house, but i had summer school. this is about how i feel and how, at the last minute, she felt. it's extremely short......

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Where was I when the sun rose?
Where was I? Nobody knows.
Where was I when the sun died?
I was waiting on the other side.

© 2008 Tai-San


Author's Note

Tai-San
sorry...like i said, extremley short.

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Powerful in its simplicity and brevity.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ohh, this is so sad! I like how you related your friend to the sun, when you wrote about how it rose and died...life always gets better though, no matter what happens to you. Good job, thumbs up!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Just because the poem is short doesn't mean it's not good. Your poem has a good impact and I can really see the emotions and meaning behind just the 4 lines. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww that is so sad...i am sorry for your loss...i would not live with out my best friend...short sweet to the point

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short sweet and to the point. i love it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short doesn't stop this piece from being powerful. Words expressing how we feel has no limits or requirements. Handling it the way you do in a poem is a wonderful tribute to her and what a friend she had in you. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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jex
it's a bit short...but it still is thought-provoking. good work. I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short, but perfect.
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Posted 16 Years Ago


This is one hell of a poem. I like it. A lot. Great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short sweet and to the point. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Tai-San
Tai-San

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About
I am single and an age. I hate people, but I love them. I get scared very easily and, well, i wont say why. I'm a poet, though i'm bad at it. My best friends are: Wa Ya As The Gothic Cowboy, ATG, .. more..

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