Telling Tales

Telling Tales

A Poem by Tai Chi Italy
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Slightly erotic....telling a tale of you know who turns you on....

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In the first five seconds
When eyes meet.
 
Tell by the chemicals
Our bodies secrete.
 
In that moment of pure clarity
All becomes clear
 
Our bodies absolutely must
Fulfil needs of our lust my dear.
 
Whether it will last?
Depends on the fluttering
 
Of heart strings, from the dove
In those first five seconds
 
Of falling in love.
In the real mean times…
 
Sexual attraction is  
Erotically sublime and just fine.

© 2008 Tai Chi Italy


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I like some of your rhymes here. They are not harsh like many of the writers here. This is a nice passionate write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very subtle the inuendo, :) ---mishy

Posted 14 Years Ago


Joyful, delightful, ..."sublime and just fine".

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OOOHHH LaLA!

I love this. So true though right?

Great job on this one.

amy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know how to write about love and lust...a romantic at heart? Beautiful write, was a pleasure to read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oooo....la...la. ;) Yes, it 'tis. Yes, it truly 'tis.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tai Chi Italy
Tai Chi Italy

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