Lost

I long for the life i lost,
for the people left behind.
Lord join us all together,
Lord grant me peace of mind.

Reviews

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Amazing piece, Tee! This is such a short poem yet so complete; it tells an entire story. The way you've managed to convey such profound emotions using hardly any words is commendable. This is a perfect example of the beauty of simplicity. I'm so in love with this! Keep up the great work! :)

[Mara]

thank you!! :)x

[BlaqkShadow]

This is beautiful, it's both peaceful and terribly sad. It contains both hope for the future and regret and loss in the past, excellent XxXx

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. I liked the thoughts and the prayer. Thank you Tee for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mara]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rana]

A touching quatrain, a moving prayer..

[Mara]

Thank you:)!

[Alias]

Short and beautiful, lovely message

[Mara]

thank you:)

[Emily]

Lovely poem!!
Keep up the great work!!

[Mara]

thank you!

[B. Boileau]

A beautiful prayer. You message touches the hearts of the reader and sends the longing feeling you have captured to our minds.

[Mara]

Thank you, glad that you liked it:)

[Jamestown]

Short sweet but so powerful:)
I just lost my younger brother friday so this piece hits home.
well written and delivered! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mara]

oh wow, im sorry for your loss, and I hope that you are ok:(