Third Eye

Open your mind
and search inside,
for the key of freedom
in the darkness it hides.

Reviews

[Rana]

I like how you used 'third eye' to refer to the mind. Meaningful, beautiful. What I found best about this was how you sketched this picture: the thoughts are the key of freedom and they are visually colorless and dark but yet there's a metaphorical light in them. Plus, the rhyme sounds really good. I love this! :)

[Mara]

Thank you, so glad you liked it :)!

[AaronFreitas]

Deep write my friend... I loved it!

[Mara]

thank you :D!

[Inject Positivity]

Very special one.....This is a short verse poem but every word is giving rise to so many thoughts in the mind of its reader.....Hats off!!!....

[Mara]

thank you :))!

[Travis Prino]

Another great read. Your writing provokes so many different thoughts. I love that. Thanks for sharing!

[Mara]

thank you so much :)!!

[dan]

Tee, Freedom is a word with many interpretations, way too numerous to mention. But when searching for the "key" of freedom, it is said by many that love is the key, whether in interpersonal relations or international relations. And it is also said that in order to find or define love one must keep one's mind open. If any or all of this is true, then the equation defined in this piece rings true, and beautifully so. Very nicely done!! take care...dan

[Mara]

i never thought of that, its a nice way of thinking about it, thank you for sharing and checking it :)!

[McBear]

Very meaningful if you think about it. Well done!

[Mara]

Thank you! :)

[Ashley Renegade]

Powerful and thought provoking! Well done!

[Mara]

Thank you :)!

[rhymeaway]

One of those pieces which will let you come up with a different interpretation every time. Great write :)

[Mara]

Thank you!! :)

[Alias]

This is the kind of thing I want tattooed on me, so good, so simple, so meaningful and spiritual.

[Mara]

aw thank you so much :D!

[B. Boileau]

Close your eyes
you will see
exactly where
to find the key...

Thoughtfull piece in exploring ones inner self.
bill

[Mara]

love it :D
thank you, happy that you liked it :)

[Keshav Bharadwaj]

Sensible......................

[Mara]

thanks for checking it out:)