wow...Tee, this is so fluid. This is absolutely amazing, the depth of the metaphor of the darkness carrying the stars away is brilliant..of course this is exactly what happens but told in the most poetic way possible. I am so delighted I had the opportunity to read this.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you so much for your kind review, really appreciate it :)!
So sweet and well crafted. The length just massively enhances the sentiment and yet leaves a sense of mystery since there's no context, you could attach whatever story you liked... beautiful - love it!x
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thanks for your kind review and for checking it out:)!
Wow. Just wow. The imagery alone is breath taking. The symbolism of someone stealing your pain in the night. My goodness its a great one. Tucking this one away for a rainy day
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you for your lovely review!, im glad you liked it ! :)
Tee, Your wisdom in your writing belies your age. I find short pieces difficult to write but this piece you've done is so cohesive and spelled out exceedingly well. Wisdom is usually dripped out in a sequence; this short sequence will stand the test of time. Great piece! take care...dan
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I'm the opposite, i find it difficult to write long pieces :)! Thank you for checking it out and for.. read moreI'm the opposite, i find it difficult to write long pieces :)! Thank you for checking it out and for the kind review:)!
cosmic confessions, what an exquisite thought in this short poem. Your poem whispers to the reader and so beautifully at that. Thank you for sharing and inviting us into your wonderful thoughts.