wow...Tee, this is so fluid. This is absolutely amazing, the depth of the metaphor of the darkness carrying the stars away is brilliant..of course this is exactly what happens but told in the most poetic way possible. I am so delighted I had the opportunity to read this.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you so much for your kind review, really appreciate it :)!
I read this as a loss of control whether that be a positive or negative is uncertain. A letting go or a taking away? Maybe you had one or the other in mind, but I like the ambiguity for myself!
Another short but sound piece of work! The master of the few words! :D I love that it's "before the sun announced the day" I think that's a very interesting viewpoint and certainly beautiful :) XxXx
Awesome! Brilliant! Spectacular! Amazing! The meaning i get from this short 4lines poetry is just beautiful....Loved it very much....Superb work my frnd....
Good to tell the moon and the stars your secrets. They hold them tightly and securely. I like the thoughts and the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote