Stars in the sky

Stars in the sky

A Poem by Mara

I told you my secrets,
you carried them away
into the darkness
before the sun announced
the day.

© 2015 Mara


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wow...Tee, this is so fluid. This is absolutely amazing, the depth of the metaphor of the darkness carrying the stars away is brilliant..of course this is exactly what happens but told in the most poetic way possible. I am so delighted I had the opportunity to read this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for your kind review, really appreciate it :)!



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Stunning imagery, Tee! It's delightfully ambiguous too. Admire it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
I read this as a loss of control whether that be a positive or negative is uncertain. A letting go or a taking away? Maybe you had one or the other in mind, but I like the ambiguity for myself!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Another short but sound piece of work! The master of the few words! :D I love that it's "before the sun announced the day" I think that's a very interesting viewpoint and certainly beautiful :) XxXx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you for the lovely review :)xx
I really like this piece. Short and sweet but very thought provoking. It can be interpreted in so many different way. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you! glad you like it :)
Short sweet and my kind of poem!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you!!:)
Awesome! Brilliant! Spectacular! Amazing! The meaning i get from this short 4lines poetry is just beautiful....Loved it very much....Superb work my frnd....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you :D! Really appreciate your kind words:)
Wow! I loved it. left me wanting more. Amazing work,poet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you, so glad you liked it :)!
Short but sweet, very meaningful poem. I hope those secrets were kept, nicely penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you !! :)
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

8 Years Ago

Anytime. :)
Good to tell the moon and the stars your secrets. They hold them tightly and securely. I like the thoughts and the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

thank you, glad you liked it :)!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
and hopefully they were kept....

so much to think about with so few, seemingly simple lines....but there is more in the darkness that we don't see or understand.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mara

8 Years Ago

very true, thank you for checking it out:)!

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Added on December 11, 2015
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United Kingdom



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