Castles in the sky

Made this one a while ago, it was an inspiration from a song that I can't remember

I always try to have an active trust
While wanting more than lust
Blowing this angel dust
With this huge gust

Please tell me why
We build castles in the sky
The Castles way up high
Please tell me why
Birds can fly....

Pumping up my fist
After receiving that kiss
I don't know why I'm pissed
I just couldn't resist
To wonder why I exist

Please tell me why
We build castles in the sky

Thinking of that smile
Just insisted making me riled
All this information that I have compiled
Made me like a child who is beguiled

Please tell me why
The Castles way up high

I remember what I have vowed
In that public oversized crowd
I know I wasn't thinking out loud
This much is all I am allowed
To uncover in this silver shroud

Please tell me why
Birds can fly....

I just want to know more
So I will no longer be outdone
So I don't need to load up that gun
And pull a fast one
All I know is that you're my loved one
What I just said can't be undone
Because this has just begun

Please tell me why
We build castles in the sky
The Castles way up high
Please tell me why
I want to fly....

Reviews

[Lightfalls]

"Please tell me why
I want to fly...."

This is beautiful. I like it a lot. It seems to capture the essence of some of the deepest questions, and longings in a heart. I know that feeling, it's so real; and this describes it wonderfully.