I Cant Have You

About This Boy Names Hayden That I Really Love But He Doesn't Love Me Plus I Need Your Help And Tell Me How I Can Win Him Over Plus I Hope You Like It

 

When I see you

You make my day

But I still can’t get you

No matter how hard I try

You run away more and more

 Trying to reach out to you

But you love someone else

Why can’t you chose me

I need you in my arms

Everyday owe Hayden

Come to me I need you

Right now because

I’m losing you

Owe god as handsome

And charming you are

I cant have you

I dream and wish

You will love me some

 Day.

Author's Note

I Need Your Help How Can I Win Hayden Over Plus I Want Your True Honest Opinion On This Poem

Reviews

[Brenden Moran]

I would look at the spelling of "owe" because I think you mean "oh" or maybe thats just me. Consider what makes your poem unique and incorporate that idea because the point of writing is writing what no one has before. Pretty good though. And the more you see the more you may realize that walking away or just being his friend is what may be best for you or just waiting, sometimes that patience is the key as well.

[smileyface123]

great poem. :)
erm ok smile and be funny and act like a friend, be confident, but not too confident. they're the main things u can do but other than that... wear nice clothes, don't stalk him, don't be shy... make conversations.
smiling the most important 1. but you've got 2 show you have a great sense of humour and show you're a really nice person :)

[TawnyBlueStar]

lovely poem :D
sounds like you really love him :)
I guess, just be there for him more than you normally would. If he is a close friend, arrange to go out with a group of friends (including him of course XD) and talk to him more than anyone else to build up your friendship :D do you have similar interests? you could go off that :) but don't be too "in his face" about being in his company
(sorry if this hasn't helped at all or makes no sense)
good luck :D