life

Life is a well written novel
It publishes 360 pages every year
It's walking a thousand miles to find the meaning of a four letter word

Life is a rose growing in the middle of a billion thorns
the rose knows that if it makes a single mistake and grows
in the wrong direction
It would be choked

Life is fragile
If you put it in the wrong hands
It melts like ice on fire.

Author's Note

feel free to tell me what improvements I should make

Reviews

[Kurai.Merodi]

Wow.
It is short but it packs a punch. I really like the idea of life being a rose and ice. I think it shows what life is and it means different things things to different people. Thank you for sharing.

[jessie p.]

Its a beautiful wonder what you express in your poem

[Jamestown]

Good write, you make some good points. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!