Dream

Dream may not just a dream.

If I could live in my dream
My world wouldn't mess up.
If I could live in my dream
No one would always notice my mistakes.
If I could live in my dream
I can separate ways of my way.
If I could live in my dream
This wouldn't be my reality.
If I could live in my dream
My dream isn't just a dream.
If I could live in my dream
You will never see me again.

Author's Note

Please excuse for some mistakes. Thanks! ♡

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

Terrific poem as I believe dreams are what keeps us going!

[Jessica]

Thanks you for the review!! I'll keep trying my best!!

[Mayank Chaudhari]

This dreamer says your dream is so dreamy...

[Jessica]

You're right.:) I am

[I Am Svetlana]

You seriously read my mind with this write! I wish everyday that I could live in my dreams cause I feel life would be so much easier. I wouldn't have to deal with the many obstacles or challenges. Living in dreams would be so beautiful...something so amazing beyond anything. The perfect piece you've created :) Bravo!!

[Jessica]

Thanks so much for loving it :) but anyway you can make your dream comes true too. I cheer you up!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams and wishes. A perfect place to know and find.
"If I could live in my dream
You will never see me again."
The great escape. Hard to find. Thank you Jessica for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jessica]

Thank you so much for supporting me, Coyote!! ♡

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jessica.

[Firemay]

there are two kinds of dreams, the ones you dream at night and the ones you want to accomplish, i think you meant the second one, but it's up to you to choose. let me know which one you choose.
if you could live in a dream there wasn't such a thing as a dream because your dream would be reality. dreams are amazing, they let you feel things even if they'll never happen, they let you live in the opportunity that you just fantasize about. But then again, if your dream becomes your reality then there's no such thing as dream and you're left with nothing but your dream. And then when things get hard you can't rely on your dream to be there to support your every move.
I'm not saying that your dream should always stay just a dream and that you should never accomplish it, but i am saying that once you get your dream, you should reach even higher to the sky and capture another one so you don't lose your hope and dreams.

[Jessica]

Yes, the one I meant to is the second one. You're right. Maybe if the dream become reality, it might not as perfect as what we were imagine. :)

[Firemay]

but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try;)

[Jessica]

That's why I promised I'll try my best hehe ^_^

[Firemay]

that's a good promise

[Jessica]

It is. Hahah I'm trying to complete it too ^^

[Firemay]

what is your dream, if i may ask

[Jessica]

My dream? Just to have a bit more thing to happy with. Just to be happy. This is it.:)

[Firemay]

wow i love it simple and good. that's adream that if you can always accomplish, everyday if you want

[Firemay]

i wrote a piece about that. it's on my profile. it's called Life and Death

[Jessica]

Ok, I'll go and check it out!

[I am that I am]

Dreams are an amazing thing. In reality, what is the difference between a dream and the life we live? When we dream it feels as real as this waking state. And the waking state feels undeniably real. But dreams are quite short lived, we live them and pass on from them, back into nothing; and we wake up. Dreams are nice while they last, we have them for a reason after all, but like a leaf in the wind, they will eventually blow away. What we truly are is eternal, the witness of waking and sleep; and I find much comfort in that over any dream.

[Jessica]

When the leave blow, there's nothing left, is only the air. Maybe we can feel it but we can't see or touch it, no matter what. There might be something that we really need, even just once in a life time, but no never. Dream is such a place where we can use our imagination to create our own world. Maybe It's sad that it won't become true but at least we can make something out of our mind and feel it. Yes, Thanls a lot for the review! I really appreciate it! I'll try my best next time! ^^

[I am that I am]

No problem. I enjoyed your writing; I wouldn't change anything about it. Nothing is wrong with loving to dream. After all, where does creation start, other the dream of one which makes their dream a reality? Thanks for sharing this piece, Jessica.

[Jessica]

Thank you too for these messages ^^ I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

[LastMonth]

If we talk about how the poem is written,
It's very Sing-along-ish. Which is a good thing, I suppose.
It made me want to hum it.

If we talk about the meaning,
It's sad, and I oppose that notion. You shouldn't wish to live your reality in a dream.
You should strive to make your dream a reality.

Thank you for a wonderful poem.

[Jessica]

Thank you so much for the review! I learned a lot, thanks!

[JBoone]

This is a very good poem. Well written. Dreams are powerful. Dreams are important. Live your dream.

[Jessica]

Thank you so much JJ for this review! ^^