Grey-Sky Lullaby

I was asked to write a song for a wedding. Here the resulting lyrics.

 

I'll try this on with you

I'll write a song for you

Lay out this quilt on a hill

Listen for the birds as they

Sing that pretty story of

A girl who found a love that was real

It's ok, It's ok.

 

You'll put on that pretty dress

The one the crowd will like the best

White dress you'll only wear for a day

Then we'll see our families

You're smiling as you walk with me

The sky will watch the doves fly away

It's our day, It's our day

 

Oh, oh falling in love from the start

Oh, but now that I know who you are

I love you more

Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for a star,

I love you so

 

Oh, oh, falling in love from the start,

Oh, but now that I know your whole heart

I love you more

Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for the stars,

I need you so...

Author's Note

I know the last two stanzas are almost identical, i just included both because one is sung softley, and one is belted at full volume. I didn't want to include only one because I didn't want the song to be too short.

Reviews

[SamBug]

Oh, oh, falling in love from the start,

Oh, but now that I know your whole heart

I love you more

Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for the stars,

I need you so...

This is the sweetest lines I have ever heard. It was the best part of this whole poem. You're an amazing writer. please don't ever stop!!!!

[Paul]

This Poem really stood out to me. It felt romantic, and peaceful when i've read it. And I love this line "Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for a star," That's my favorite line because it really displays the romance between the people who are getting married. Maginificant write! :)

[Miss Coral]

Beautifully done.. I love the first and last stanzas. Another great piece, I'm sure it's great when sung. Nice job. c:

[Screamplay]

Brilliant

[♥(heatherawesome..]

love it keep it up

[biggle]

i like it, very nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. So many lines stood out.
"You'll put on that pretty dress
The one the crowd will like the best
White dress you'll only wear for a day"
The complete poem was excellent. Each line telling of appreciation and thankfulness for the gift of love. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

I really liked it. The flow was great for a song like these, and I do like how you worded it. It made it :D

[Martz]

i really enjoyed this poem. once again good job.

[Katelyn Stuart]

Very nice.

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

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