Tell Me With Your Eyes

Just one more song in the TK collection.

 

Tell me one thing

I don't know about you.

I'll give you a list of things

you know I'd do for you

 

So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking.

Look at me,

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listiening?

 

Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless

 

Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking

Look at me

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listening?

 

That look you give me makes me

S-s-s-stutter

Instead of glaring won't you

Help me make this

B-b-b-better now,

Oh I promise it'll be worth it.

We all had so much,

don't make me forget it.

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....

Author's Note

Want to hear it? go here: http://www.myspace.com/thetadkentproject . You don't have to be a myspace member, just click it. Scroll down, and it's the video on the right. :)

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

cute lyrics. And I LOVE that the Frames are your numero uno on myspace. =) You're a very talented writer. For once, I have no critique in a review... feels strange. lol. I would mention the rhythm, but I know it goes with the music, so... yep. I enjoyed reading. A lot. =)
KH

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

The eyes are very powerful- you have definitely captured the essence of wanting, longing to know another profoundly here. Nice work.
Light,
SiddARTha

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very good. We need conversation and human contact to stay human. I like the flow and the strong statements in your words. Total poem was very good. I like the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

Expierencing a very simular sittaution... great write

[Jennifer Pennington]

Wow...this is absolutely amazing. Very well written lyrics my friend. Keep up the good work!

[The Water Queen]

This is a beautiful song. I would love to hear the music behind these wonderful words

[Laura]

This was really well written. It had a lot of emotion and feel to it. I thought that how you wrote "S-s-s-stutter". I thought that was great. I love your stuff, it's great
: )

[Hi]

Lol... *speechless* Does that explain how good you are?

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

very nice. well written, chocked full of emotion. amazing song and i wish i could hear the tune. little typo in the first chorus it should say "listening" you've got an "i" in there. but other than that. amazing poem/song. keep up the good work =) and i like how you actually "stuttered" great job

[Ashley.M.E]

this is really good. I like the way you wrote it. Usually i say more, but i can't think of what else to write.

[Dutch Jr.]

Wow. Nice write. Your tone is so enjoyable. Great job.