Tell Me With Your Eyes

Tell Me With Your Eyes

A Poem by TadKent
"

Just one more song in the TK collection.

"

 

Tell me one thing

I don't know about you.

I'll give you a list of things

you know I'd do for you

 

So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking.

Look at me,

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listiening?

 

Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless

 

Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking

Look at me

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listening?

 

That look you give me makes me

S-s-s-stutter

Instead of glaring won't you

Help me make this

B-b-b-better now,

Oh I promise it'll be worth it.

We all had so much,

don't make me forget it.

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....

© 2010 TadKent


Author's Note

TadKent
Want to hear it? go here: http://www.myspace.com/thetadkentproject . You don't have to be a myspace member, just click it. Scroll down, and it's the video on the right. :)

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cute lyrics. And I LOVE that the Frames are your numero uno on myspace. =) You're a very talented writer. For once, I have no critique in a review... feels strange. lol. I would mention the rhythm, but I know it goes with the music, so... yep. I enjoyed reading. A lot. =)
KH

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I always like to read the lyrics before I listen to a song, I don't know I guess I'm weird like that. There's a great flow and I can almost sense the body landuage. This is a really good piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Reading this is so sad! I like the way that you're using the image of the eyes as a motto for honesty. It seems like this relationship has broken to the point where words are said but the lack of eye contact makes them just that, words alone. The 'silence is your new best friend' line works so well to describe the fact that this is a relationship that has ended for one person but he/she can't bear to let the other know. It's horribly tragic when that happens. Great work and a really emotive choice of subject well executed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful piece of poetry, TadKent....:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is truly amazing, i love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like your songs :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is an awesome poem and i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is a wondrous personal element that connects your words to the heart.. an underlying, rich emotion. This flows like a song, and love the lyrical, poetic feel.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Body language is so important, much more important that words, at least to me in a relationship and you have expressed that and more in your beautiful lyrics.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, your lyrics are beautiful. The words fit together perfectly, it creates such a nice sound.

Posted 14 Years Ago


These lyrics are deep and beautiful. I loved the flow and everything else about this.
Great song.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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TadKent
TadKent

Fresno, CA



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I'm a twenty-one year old musician from Fresno, California. I've been in an incredible relationship with the Love of my life for three years now, so I am very much taken. I write all kinds of things, .. more..

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