Tell Me With Your Eyes

Just one more song in the TK collection.

 

Tell me one thing

I don't know about you.

I'll give you a list of things

you know I'd do for you

 

So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking.

Look at me,

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listiening?

 

Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless

 

Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking

Look at me

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listening?

 

That look you give me makes me

S-s-s-stutter

Instead of glaring won't you

Help me make this

B-b-b-better now,

Oh I promise it'll be worth it.

We all had so much,

don't make me forget it.

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....

Author's Note

Want to hear it? go here: http://www.myspace.com/thetadkentproject . You don't have to be a myspace member, just click it. Scroll down, and it's the video on the right. :)

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

cute lyrics. And I LOVE that the Frames are your numero uno on myspace. =) You're a very talented writer. For once, I have no critique in a review... feels strange. lol. I would mention the rhythm, but I know it goes with the music, so... yep. I enjoyed reading. A lot. =)
KH

[Amy Bumpas]

This poem had a good rhythm to it. Nothing like telling someone
something with their eyes. You have some really great lines
in this: So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend

Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....
I found some of this to be sexy...nice write!

[The Tea Party Mouse.]

Hmm, nice. Nothing is deeper than a person's eyes, yes? :P

[zombiikillah666]

this is really good.
you..have talent. xD

[Martz]

i liked this one too. great work, really.

[Rebekah Joy]

love love love!

[Liza]

such intensity in this write; how insightful the eye is in silence....it can be intimidating for some to glare straight into another's eyes....but we can learn so much....thought provoking write!

[Ladysue]

very well written lyrics. A wonderful piece of poetry... :)

[Lyssa_luvv]

Amazing lyrics :) I also listened to it. You have a very nice voice.

[ShAb]

Interesting, i like the whole personal feelings attached to it..:) it will make a good song..:)
poetically though, a little weak..:) but overall its a fine read..:)