Easy, Tiger...

A bit of an angry song I wrote a while ago. To hear it, go here: http://www.myspace.com/thetadkentproject . Not as "pretty" as my other stuff. Comment or whatever for explanation on song title. = ]

 

I heard about

The way you say you're gone inside...

And all about,

the way you die when I walk by.

I wonder if

there's times I ever cross your mind

Or if you've thought

about the day you said goodbye

 

Someday it will all catch up to you

Whether you like it or not

 

You say that we're all over,

Well I agree.

There's now way to start it up again

Get over the way you hate me.

It's clear that we're all done

It's too much of you to ask of me

Just wait and see...

 

I wonder when

You come around to realise...

There's no need to yell

I've always been on your side.

A mystery,

that I'm a monster in your eyes.

I wish you'd see

I was waiting in plain sight

 

I'm standin' right in front of you

whether you like it or not...

 

You say that we're all over,

Love, I agree.

There's no way to start it up again

I'm over the way you hate me

It's clear that we're all done.

It's too much of you to ask of me,

just wait and see-

 

And as I walk across this place

I'm sure that i'm the only one,

That should avoid that hateful gaze.

 

You say the we're all over,

Well I agree.

There;s no way to start it up again,

I'm over the way you hate me.

It's clear that we're all done.

It's too much of you to ask of me

Just wait and see.

Author's Note

Angry I know.

Reviews

[RDOriginal]

There's quite a bit of anger in here but I see it more as emotional hurt than anything destructive or vindictive. The reprtition of 'no way to start it up again' rings a little like a phrase that's been said to you and you're repeating it like a mantra in order to hold back feelings or cling to false hope. I liked this a lot.

[honeybee]

cool :)

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is so aweosme and good job

[KatiePie]

There's so much hurt and pain in this, I can tell your angry and frusturated, but all of that comes from pain :( Aww :(
I bet it all turned out the way it was supposed to though, with two people finding loves. :)
Yay ^_^ 2 points for Lisa :) hahaha
-Cathrine

[Rebekah Joy]

OMG this is the best song I've heard in so long! (i went and listened) you said it wasn't as pretty as your other stuff, but this is the prettiest writing i've red. It gives me the same feeling daniel merryweather's "red" gives me.

[thatbryngirl]

its kinda angry..but its very very goood. and i listened to it and i love it! :) ur reallyyy good:)

[Sara]

wow, this is a really great song! :D i like how the song itself sounded kinda mellow, but the words behind it were very emotional and full of pain... i can't sing or play an instrument, so i'm a bit in awe of you right now for putting together something like this... but i definitely enjoyed it -- wonderful piece!

[TadKent]

You guys read me too well. ; )

[Laura]

I see a lot of hurt here with some anger too. You wrote this beautifully and it flows extremely well. I think you did an amazing job, one of my favorites. : )

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

I really love this, but I agree with RichardP too: there is some anger in there, but it seems more like you've been hurt. A beautiful song :)

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

RichardP's right. it doesn't sound angry to me. it sounds like you've been hurt. this is a beautiful poem. you should add the song on here so that it's easier to hear with this. you have an amaing voice and the guitar was great. really really nice song.