Places

Where you and I go.

 

Let's go, Love

I'll take you again

Remember all the places we've went?

The ocean a mirror, the sky a window

I'm sure you couldn't forget..

 

Come along, Dear

Off to the moon again

We climbed a silver staircase, raced to the summit,

Stars all around, Ahead and full sail

Your eyes so alive in wonder...

 

Here we are, Kid

Here at this place again, this room full of music

Alone in this concert hall, waltzing to the orchestra

performing the soundtrack of us.

Take me back again.

 

Follow me, Love

At the last place again

Our park in full autumn, leaves colouring in the wind

Park bench for two, fly our kites in the blue

That piano playing off in the distance.

Author's Note

Haha, kind of obscure, I know.

Reviews

[Sasha]

It is a little obscure but not headache inducing obscure like some of these romantic poems I see around. I understood what you were getting at and thought you used some nice imagery. The one thing I didn't understand is "Here we are, Kid". It seemed odd to address your SO that way, but I've heard worse.
Good job.

[MiidniightSoul]

Such a romantic poem I liked it :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Just a touch obscure..does seem personal .. a romance wanting to be renewed .. Follow me, Love

At the last place again

Our park in full autumn, leaves colouring in the wind

Park bench for two, fly our kites in the blue

That piano playing off in the distance.

I like this verse best...it is lovely..

Chloe

[♥(heatherawesome..]

i love this poem adn it is really nice and it could of been a little better

[Bandgeek]

i think this poem is just romantic. i love it!!

[An owl on the moon]

Seems like a very personal song to the one you love.. the one you've shared such wonderful memories with.. Beautiful, moving imagery that captures that sense of vivid place and the emotional connections.

[J.Black]

Since you are a musician and all- these would be fantastic to actually have a listen to. Pretty nice imagery!

[Rebekah Joy]

i wish i could hear you sing this i bet it would be amazing

[a]

You know,
I'd sure love
To hear the music!

Thank you!

[c.m.]

A little obscure, but extremely beautiful.
"Your eyes so alive in wonder..."
I love that, wonderful words. Great piece, love.

[peaches]

you should publish this its really good.