Places

Places

A Poem by TadKent
"

Where you and I go.

"

 

Let's go, Love

I'll take you again

Remember all the places we've went?

The ocean a mirror, the sky a window

I'm sure you couldn't forget..

 

Come along, Dear

Off to the moon again

We climbed a silver staircase, raced to the summit,

Stars all around, Ahead and full sail

Your eyes so alive in wonder...

 

Here we are, Kid

Here at this place again, this room full of music

Alone in this concert hall, waltzing to the orchestra

performing the soundtrack of us.

Take me back again.

 

Follow me, Love

At the last place again

Our park in full autumn, leaves colouring in the wind

Park bench for two, fly our kites in the blue

That piano playing off in the distance.

© 2010 TadKent


Author's Note

TadKent
Haha, kind of obscure, I know.

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It is a little obscure but not headache inducing obscure like some of these romantic poems I see around. I understood what you were getting at and thought you used some nice imagery. The one thing I didn't understand is "Here we are, Kid". It seemed odd to address your SO that way, but I've heard worse.
Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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So beautiful and passionate and i love the imagery

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very descriptive work with passionate overtones..Sunflower

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so beautiful! I love your choice of words. I was reading on your myspace page about how much you love your girlfriend, well let that be your passion and your drive to write new songs. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very pretty. I love the adjective use. I love it =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very romantic...I really like the feel to this. When I read this I felt like I was floating in a sea of stars...Or something :P Anyways, This is good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The piano in the disatant kicks a*s! Excellent imagery:)
Of all the places you could have written about, this is unique:)
Great poem
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


A poem of remembrance, seemingly very romantic, remembering times and places spent in love...brought a smile to my face...I was reminded of places I have been with special people in my life. This poem is a pleasure to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Really good, and not annoying to read like some other romantic poetry where u feel put of place readin it. But I do agree that kid is a bit awekward... But to each his own...

Posted 14 Years Ago


ugh it isnt working. All i can say is I love it and it may be a little obscure but cool and awesome

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TadKent
TadKent

Fresno, CA



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