Only for you (my smile)

i walk everyday admiring you from afar...

i never truly have the courage to approach such a wonderful woman...

i brush it off and go on with my day...

you heard me before saying "my smile being only for you..."

doing small favors always trying to catch your eye...

always around you and your friends...

babysitting your family till its time to go...

you heard me before saying "my smile being only for you..."

buying your lunches as i pick up your trash...

picking up your loose strings as i ravish in your solitude...

looking over my shoulder i keep you in my thoughts...

you heard me before saying "my smile being only for you..."

but now one day i see you in some other mans arms...

i keep hushed as i keep my routine just the same...

even if its for the best and keeps a smile on your face...

you heard me before saying "my smile being only for you...i'll sacrifice my right to have one"

Reviews

[Alex Figueroa]

haha thanks baby it means a lot having so many people back me up on this =]

[Serenity]

awww that is a really sweet poem, sorry but im a hopless romantic, and the meaning behind the poem is really sweet, good job

[李[A]]

Overall this is a very interesting structure and very nicely written. I would recommend that you make this poem more fluid. Perhaps it's the ellipsis. Nonetheless, good job!