I need you to understand.

This is one I just kind of winged it at. It just kind of came so I started writing.

I'm looking for something

Something I have not found

Will you save me

be my something

I'm hurting

invisible me

truthfully

you probably don't want me

but I can be consoling

when I myself need your comfort as well

young love

young thoughts

young needs

young voice

Can anyone hear me?

Where am I going

Where was I

Who am I

Do you know?

If you find her

tell me

she's lonely

she needs someone to hold her

someone to respect her

be hers

Love her

need her

a friend

a lover

all applications accepted

Don't forget her

She misses you dearly.

Author's Note

This as I've realized can relate to all ages and the truth that is everyone is searching for something,whether is be themselves,or another companion. :D No "Oh Well's."

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

Why are you writing in your author's notes oh well. That shows that you don't care about the writing you are presenting for us to read. I look at the author's note section before reading the actual writing. It discouraged me to believe that this poem is personal to you. As stated in my other review of your poems you should be writing about your own personal experiences. Dig deep inside for your most powerful emotions, and your poems will be greatly improved as a result.

[Rose Masen]

You're awesome. I loved it. The flow was great, too. :)

[Gone]

I agree with Kiri about the stanzas. This is wonderfully full of emotion and it is expressed well. All the rest in poetry is polish IMO. good write.

[Kiri Nells]

I can see the emotion behind it and it's mostly smooth all the way through. I love free-verse beause, truthfully, I'm not all that great at it. (it's because I'm a bando) There are some places where I felt there should be a stanza break. Other than that, it's really very good.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is a teen poem , or is it? All humans need the same no matter the age.
You wrote this very well. I like the questions asked and searching .. your last three lines are really good..

[TabbyLeeT]

This is probably aimed towards teenage girls my age and how we're still a little lost in the world,how we need someone to guide us and be a friend and consoles, I have one called My God I may be posting but I'm not sure about it yet,