Rain

Where there's gray clouds

rain entertains its wet games

hopscotch market parking lot

upset'n world trade

money fades no alcolades

rain has fangs

everyone twice bit'n

funnel clouds wild

curls and swirls spout

letting H2o out

snow & rain winter's wet fame

playing earth's game

of necessity

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the beat of this...the inferences to the storm of capitalism...nature entertains for free...but money enters into the picture of life...maybe by necessity, but its own storm makes such an imbalance in the nature and stature of human kind.
wow, wow, and wow to this piece of writing...
j.

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Good one, I enjoy it, more ink to flow

[emmajoy]

A careful mix of metaphors turns this poem into something more than might be, it's quite a challenge - somehow sending a smile or two along with the invitation to think a little deeper. Perhaps!? 'Like what your mind unravels, Roxane!

[barleygirl]

Truly full of sparkling originality, especially when it's about an everyday experience! I like your little touches of exaggeration, such as rain disrupting world trade -- it's that kind of uninhibited thinking that pushes a poem into new realms of interest! Good word-sound-play, rhymes, & rhythm, too! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

I’ll have to get started reading more of your work as I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing, it is beautiful. Bravo!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow, really enjoyed the creativity you showed here... read this twice! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Excellent write!