As in Come the Rain

As in came the rain

untamed 
fastened cold showed
wetness rolled

as in came the rain
sun refrains 
stage freight come night
dampen shadows 
spotlight concrete crystals

as in came the rain
silhouettes curvy black
Marvin Gaye grooves mood
rainbows elude 

grayish night 
kisses reign
you & I

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

Good write, Roxane. You paint a vivid scene and set the mood so well. Marvin Gaye was a particularly good touch. I hear his voice in the darkness.

[BlackPrince]

OOOH
I love that line: 'Kisses reign you and I'

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awesome write... I love the rain and I enjoyed your witty description of a storm.