I'm Capable

I think I can.

I know I can.

I will be able to

do what I'm 

capable of doing.

In honor of the life

I've been given, I

must make use of

it.  If I'm lazy,

I'm nothing. Just

existing. Let me

make use of my

known capabilities.

then shall I become

content and help

another.

Reviews

[Relic]

A worthy mantra and ending to this. :)

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks very much.

[Paul Bell]

The words we must say to ourselves everyday.
Though I think when we do use our senses, we are capable of doing anything.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for the kind review.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

A solid outing here very thought provoking and lets the reader know exactly what you are feeling my only critique would be to perhaps centralise the structure of your poem to make it more visually stunning and create stanza breaks and single lines to make those lines stand out more

[ROXANE DORSEY]

two head are better at it. construct the outline. and I will take it in consideration. please. i would love to see the style the way you critique, please i love to see. please and I use it.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I've messaged you a re-write

[JackValor86]

the lines "if I'm lazy, I'm nothing, just existing" are some powerful ones

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for the kind review and read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

helping others is a perfect way to give our lives meaning.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

yes it is and thanks for the read.