Obstacles In Life

Obstacles In Life

A Poem by ROXANE DORSEY

There's an obstacle in everyone's way.
My obstacle is right dead in my face.
Facing me, why cans't I see that 
problem in front of me.

In my head became the sleuth on the
loose. How can I get over, under or
through?  I'm thinking, leave me lone.
I must figure out what to do.
Nothing's in my way except this small
hurdle I call my problem.

Since day one I should've resolved it
when the problem was wee bit.
Now my bit grew bigger, looks of it
sure to put up a fight and bite.....but
I won't give up on this thing called
Life.

© 2017 ROXANE DORSEY


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I literally needed this today! THANK YOU! You are a saint.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I liked the journey leading to the proper ending.
"..but
I won't give up on this thing called
Life."
The above lines. Is true, we must go forward. Thank you Roxane for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


it seems life does bite us from time to time

Posted 7 Years Ago


every time we stand and work through things we grow ...life challenges us in many ways and difficulty levels .. the hope and strength in your poem is inspiring and what i take away with me for this dawning morn ;) thanks for sharing
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


avoidance isn't a solution. can't just sweep things under the rug - must be dealt with sooner or later. a stitch in time, saves nine. you present something to be mulled over. must not give up - have faith!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very well written and thought provoking.

"My obstacle is right dead in my face. Facing me..."

To me this means we find the root cause of most obstacles by looking in the mirror (which is also usually the source of the route around it).

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review.
feelings of being kept down and hope. A common theme that everyone can relate to, ending on a positive note

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

conquering what life is bout, blesses us through the way. thanks for the review.
may problems in life...we seem to spend our entire lives trying to solve the mystery of what ails us...
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review and read of my poems
we all face trails and tribulations in our life time. It's up to how it gets handled determined the outcome of ones life. treat people the way you'd want to be treated, with respect or however you dish it, shall return the Karma.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 1, 2017
Last Updated on November 15, 2017
Tags: #thinking, #obstacles, #smallproblem, #Life

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ROXANE DORSEY
ROXANE DORSEY

baltimore, MD



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love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..

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