Eyes Twinkle

My eyes twinkle for you

I see a spark sparking from

the look in your eyes.

Shooting stars stop to see

what they miss so sexy.  

My love, my friend, my man. 

Not a grin! Or any smiles, 

just a handsome look and

one of a kind. Boy I'm glad

you're mine.

I Love you dearly.

Reviews

[JackValor86]

Shouldn't the title be Eyes Twinkle? But I like the poem, if someone wrote a poem like that for me, I'd melt.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I thank you very kindly for the lovely review and I dropped the s. thanks

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the sentiment here, although the poem is more like a prose letter...I would eliminate the "Boy" from the 8th line...and title should be Eyes Twinkle...
but as i said...this has very strong sentiment.
j.