Little Star

-----dancing star, I wonder who you are.

It rains on your parade, but you show up

another day. Around and round orbit you

dance with your hot pants. so hot to you

twinkle. 

-----little star watch out for a planet 

called Mars. The dirt is red, there's no

comfortable bed to lay your head. The

flowers won't grow nor should a human go.

-----shine on planet earth to show where

the better dirt is clear. Waterfalls and

insects sing their harmony. As you always

dancing the twinkle in space where the 

real stars are and out of reach. You give

me a happy show every night to brighten

up my life.

Reviews

[Taylor]

Nice very nice the only thing I didn't like is that there a line similar to the song, but there's nothing wrong with that.

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Roxanne. I did enjoy this poem.
"` As you always
dancing the twinkle in space where the
real stars are and out of reach. You give
me a happy show every night to brighten
up my life."
I did like the above lines. Hopeful and wonderful. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[richieb]

Roxanne,
I like the reference of the little star dancing in hot pants so hot it makes the star twinkle. Very creative.
Richie b.

[Einstein Noodle]

interesting presentation ...always the optimist i am grateful for the positive closing .. fun play with the nursery rhyme and cliche's .. sharp contrast between hostile Mars and fertile Earth ..
E.

[Paul Bell]

Was always told as a kid. All my dead relations were stars. Maybe that's true for everyone. So a show is a must every night. Who knows what the future holds for space travel. Is there others like us.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for the kind review.