My Knight In Armor

     Here comes a knight in shinning armor.  Sparkling tin he's in.

Them eyes creep peep upon my shoulders with a hardness. It''s

piecing to my flesh. No other man comes close to enter my mind 

and find sensation. Through smooth talk to rough caresses, you

come to bless my assets.  Ride my merry-go-round 'til your little

man drop. I'll stop, resuscitate the length to fit my damp

tunnel.  I come to lighten his load of liquid. He'll be good upon

many miles down the road.

Reviews

[Taylor]

I don't know what meaning you had for this but here's what I see while reading this. A horse not just any horse but one that will set you free one that will take you to the promised land or somewhere desirable to you. This is how I see it because you don't always need a man to save you or approve of what you do. I have recently learned this myself and truly believe it is important to know these things about yourself because in a room alone you will mean something, but if you let people define who you are then you're no one by yourself.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of thoughts. You made the reader believe you. Thank you Roxane for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

well i guess i`m with einstein,but it didn`t suprise me

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks a bit much wordman for those kind words.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha i love this bawdy little romp ... "...come to bless my assets" ...and "...'til your little
man drop." ..just a couple lines that grab me ;) Roxane... you surprise me ... fun and just the right amount of irreverence
E.
ps. the strength and control of the woman is spectacular says i!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

glad you like the poem. thanks for the kind review.