Pests

Pests

A Poem by ROXANE DORSEY

circulating in circles that fancy fan above my bed over my head.
thinning the room cool. An opening window brings a breeze.
Blowing lace curtains which way it seems.
I'm too comfortable, cross my legs, hands on my head.
resting away.  Silence_____ I hear nature outside 
my crooked walls.
In comes a pest.
The wasp wants to nest.
To my surprise, a damn horse fly.
Buzzed pass my eyes.
Too loud.
Too clear.
I don't want that fly near.
I know it knows everything in the room.
He zoomed before his doom.
To the ceiling, out my way.
I got to shoo that pest to get my rest.
Gees, I can't kill a fly. I'm too slow.
Out the window, he go. Buzzed away!

© 2017 ROXANE DORSEY


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Good imagery! I hate wasps and flies too though I have never written about how they bug me so. You are amazing keep it up!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Was this truely about your surroundings you were writing? Becuase you made it sound so vivid and clear to the reader. Lovely peice. Keep it up roxanne

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

Yes, total was. thanks for the kind review.
Wowza... You had my attention from the get-go with that first line... Fancy fan above bed and head... Wonderful pull-in, and the rest of it... Almost struck by how normal it is, yet at the same time you use such a simply perfect word format... And rhyme format... And meter... Which many people tend to forget about... This was fantastically penned... They always seem to be faster than us... Ugh... Haha

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed this piece and thanks for reviewing.
Roxane, pest come along in all shapes and sizes from actual insects to ridiculous humans. Very nice job it was amusing. Thank you for sharing.

Sheer Terror

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review and read.
That's the price you pay for refreshing wind to cool your house.bugs are like little kids.they annoy you but you deal with it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

Nothing like fresh air n a pest to fly with it. thanks for the kind review.
Those bugs. Easy to find their way in and hard to push-out. I enjoyed the story in the poetry. Peaceful ending dear Roxane.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I guess you could call that a close call. That darned thing disturbed what had been a lovely rest. I go postal when I see insects in the house! (usually flies)

Posted 7 Years Ago


damn girl close that window,,lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

HA,HA GOOD ONE N THANKS.
well...there is more than one way to get rid of pesty intruders ... how difficult it is to maintain silence of the mind ... ;) but it is so healing and precious isn't it?!
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review.
It's amazing how you can smash your house up when a pest enters. Or when I fall down the stairs drunk.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thanks Paul for the nice review and reading my poem.

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Added on October 19, 2017
Last Updated on October 20, 2017
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ROXANE DORSEY
ROXANE DORSEY

baltimore, MD



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love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..

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