My Shadow

Though an enemy may camp behind,

I shall have my shadow between us.

I too shall make tracks.

May he get lost in kick dust to dusk.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting last line....and that shadow surely can act as our guardian angel....

j.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

glad you enjoyed thanks for read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So often our own worst enemy is ourselves... but when face the darkness we create with then we can lose the shadow that haunts us.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Thanks for the nice review.

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooooooooooo... power packed punching... so many sublime innuendo ... as shadow veils ...its only as good as positioning with the light .. so ... a bit of a dust storm is great strategy .. enjoyed the trip this little poem took me on ..nice job!
E.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

nice review thanks