What I Have

I have nothing yet I possess everything.

I formulated a plan to conceive something.

Something inside me feel a need to achieve.

I thrive with positive energy around me.

It's that needed energy to help me grow

in a world that can be so cold.

The very thing I possess attracts positive

people wanting the best.

Reviews

[Taylor]

Beautiful!!! Very nice, but not everyone is in your life for your possessions. I wouldn't be. You are a very good person and though you may have many possessions you don't own everything so don't believe people want things from you because you are way more than your simple possessions. You are a complex human being and you are beautiful. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the logic of the poem. You are right. Positive energy attract people. The light of hope and a kind smile. Make other folks wish to know what you have found and know. Thank you Roxane for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks v much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Roxane.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I read some time earlier that keep thinking positive is actually a state of denial, you keep thriving off the higher power for things to get better and neglect your current situation. And maybe it's healthy for the time being but I agree with the thought, Being realistic should be more it and keeping a balance...

You write really well and this piece made me think so thank you for that (:

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Thanks Doc for you kind review.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Just Yumna would be okay too ;) doc makes me appear soo old lol jk ;P you're welcome, Roxane. Always a pleasure reading good works (:

[Mirror]

the reader will have full expectation from your title then afterwards will be left wondering, "what is that thing that you have?"

"I have nothing yet I possess everything...." With this line, i then smiled, "I have nothing..."

[ROXANE DORSEY]

hope you get some type of meaning from the poem. thanks.

[Einstein Noodle]

i feel you ;) sending you lightning bolts of positive ... can you feel it ?
wonderful "positive" little poem ..going to take it with me as i sign off the cafe for the day ... perfect place for it ..love and peace Roxane!
E.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Hope to chat wit you soon thanks for the kind review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we are more important to others than we realize....like in a Wonderful Life (the movie)
George Bailey's life affected others more than he ever knew...and in such a positive way.
nice piece...third line...i read as "Something inside me feels a need"

j.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I agree. thanks for the nice review and read.

[John the Baptist]

This one would make a great affirmation upon arising and then again before retiring. There is so much negative energy around now that we need to counteract it regularly by reading pieces such as this one. Well done.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Thanks for the positive review and reading my poetry.