Nothing better than saying hello with a kiss.
Well, a smoochie kiss is always nice too.
As long as it doesn't lead to anything else.
Well, anything else you can talk about.
Good work. The flow is perfect. Remove the line "Love never fight" It is a known phenomenon. it may spoil the moment of the kiss in the mind of the reader.
But your work is always good. i love your writings.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Hey thanks a million. Glad you enjoy my poetry flow.
makes me travel back in thought to my first one...well, there was more than one...an experience that can never duplicated---not by a creek though, it was in a small woods...:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
What to laugh, at age 10, I thought my beginning period, came from kissing boys. I told myself I qui.. read moreWhat to laugh, at age 10, I thought my beginning period, came from kissing boys. I told myself I quit to think the monthly red would go away, noooot!
thanks for reading my poetry.
love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..