Sure Feelings to the Beat

Upon entering the church, immediately the

beating of drums summoned my participation.

I didn't hesitate to move left, right, up & down.

My head & hands lead my body's band.

March on sweet saints.

March on ol' faithful one.

I clapped.

I hummed.

And stomped my feet to an uncontrollable

gospel beat.  I tuned in.

Yes, I felt apart of it.

Whatever it was my soul connected wit

the sure feeling wit something out of 

this world.  Something I felt before like

opening heaven's door.

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

The love of your faith and the spirituality of this one is fantastic. I could almost hear the gospel choir and feel the beat. Lydi**

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks and if you dare try reading song of the birds i written. hope you like.

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A nice idea.....

Losing yourself to the beat and energy of the gospel church power. I have never bore witness to the energy that pours forth in a gospel church but i am well aware of it's power and the magnificence of it's relationship to song. I imagine one does get swept away, body and soul, in the wave of energy and devotion to the Lord.

Your piece gives the reader a descriptive insight into the emotions and power of the gospel church. Very well written.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Our souls connects to music, it's apart of us. thanks for the nice review.