feeling love

feeling love

A Poem by ROXANE DORSEY

Your love is like butter, it make me melt when our sun shines.
Take me, love butter, let your silky hands feel me through.
What we possess can help the world.
Picture the midnight moon, its darkness & stary hosts. It's love's back drop.
All the blooming trees, flowing waters and loud crickets, sets 
the mood in place.  The atmosphere is stern.
If for one night I drown in butter love, I can tell no one.
Love of no other has filled me & taken hold. 
I'm in my feelings with love.

© 2017 ROXANE DORSEY


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Love like butter is great impression. I really love it . This poem just really melting me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thank you.
I liked the way you used butter to show your emotions.... Creative

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

thank you.
I liked the emotion within these lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

How thank you. I 'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you very very much Chris.
Chris

7 Years Ago

You're welcome...

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ROXANE DORSEY
ROXANE DORSEY

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love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..

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