Still My Thrill

Baby darling, sweet baby.  I feel your love inside my heart.

Dear baby, oh sweet darling baby.

Your love thrills me.  Make me jump every time you and I

bump to the grind.

I can't get that thrill with no other.

Baby boy, yes, you are my dearest friend to the end.

Beauty it was in our beginnings of tales.

Love I fell in the middle, then you played me like a fiddle.

tweedle dee dum de dum dum your the dumb one. 

Love notes, I proposed!

String'd me along with that same ol' love song.

When it gave me the blues, I had to choose.

Karma's a b*tch on a bungee string.

I'll be the last woman to sing, "You're still a girl's thrill."  

Reviews

[Sammi]

Sometimes a girl just keeps on coming back for more even when she knows she's being played because it's just sooo good she can't help herself and o'boy do you know how to sing it Roxane "the gotta have it blues", you're such a beautiful writer I love reading you -- thanks so truly for the goodtime sharing! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

PS cum see me sometime. ;)

[Taylor]

Karma is karma is. Oh my gosh this makes me so happy and less hung up about my ex. Thank you.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Glad you liked my poem. My ex came back, we are currently in love and it's been over 30yrs. It felt like we never separated and it's even better the 2nd time around. We taken things slowwwww.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Love the line about karma...never heard that one before. What can I say about this? Love and time make fools of us all. If someone thinks not they've just not lived enough yet. My grandpa one time told me that being in love was like blackberry picking in a cow pasture; he said, if you're real careful and watch every step you take, you'll probably end up in the sh*t anyway. I enjoyed the read.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for the great review and reading my poem. try a few more. hope you like.

[Relic]

There are some addictions we just can't refuse no matter what. Some grinds can't be denied. Only fortified. :)

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Glad you like the poem. thanks for the review.

[heavenscentgirl1]

Tell it like it is Roxane! Your words are so relatable and flow sweetly like lyrics of a song. Nicely done.

~ hsg

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for viewing my poem.

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Sound like very nice song. You got melody in your words. Well done.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks very much for view my poetry. roxane

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You welcome I really like it.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A poem about the wonderful co-reaction of love. You write it well.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

plz try a few more of my poems if you dare or like to.

[Lydia Shutter]

Romantic and filled with desire. Had a rhythm like a song....I like it. Lydi**

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thank you for your nice review