Still My Thrill

Baby darling, sweet baby.  I feel your love inside my heart.

Dear baby, oh sweet darling baby.

Your love thrills me.  Make me jump every time you and I

bump to the grind.

I can't get that thrill with no other.

Baby boy, yes, you are my dearest friend to the end.

Beauty it was in our beginnings of tales.

Love I fell in the middle, then you played me like a fiddle.

tweedle dee dum de dum dum your the dumb one. 

Love notes, I proposed!

String'd me along with that same ol' love song.

When it gave me the blues, I had to choose.

Karma's a b*tch on a bungee string.

I'll be the last woman to sing, "You're still a girl's thrill."  

Reviews

[Sammi]

Sometimes a girl just keeps on coming back for more even when she knows she's being played because it's just sooo good she can't help herself and o'boy do you know how to sing it Roxane "the gotta have it blues", you're such a beautiful writer I love reading you -- thanks so truly for the goodtime sharing! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

PS cum see me sometime. ;)

[JackValor86]

i read this with a bit of an impromptu singing rhythm, they kind of feel like lyrics .

[ROXANE DORSEY]

long as you understand and can relate, thanks for the kind review.

[duff]

I love the blues feel to this. Its real with a story unraveling before the reader. Heartache with stylistic delivery. Nice work.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I am glad you like the poem and thanks for the review.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I am astonished at how many views and reviews this poem has gotten. I am taking time out to thank my readers.

Roxane D.

[Chris]

Hell, when you're IN Love you ARE IN Love, ain't no "makin' do" niceties.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

So true at times. thanks for the review.

[Ayvid N]

Karma's a b*tch on a bungee string.
I'll be the last woman to sing, "You're still a girl's thrill."

Struck such a chord in me. A lovely, musical poem, fills me with passion and elation!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

yeah it is Karma, n some can't handle it. thanks for the kind review.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Roxane, a scathing and gutsy write. The band plays on as does life. I love the bluesy feel of this, so on point. Sometimes a girl just needs a new song to sing.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Aloha Island Hippy, thanks for the kind write in response.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I definitely feel this one Roxane. You have to swing and sway with the flow, rhythm and musicality of it. Your lines are brilliant- “Karma’s a b*tch on a bungee string.” Every word cutting sharp and true. The player finally gets played. Last line slays. I’m saving this for sure. Superb!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for the kind review of my poem.

[Zoya]

That's sweet. I can feel the love with which you've written this one. So tenderly penned!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Hey Z, glad you could review n like my poem. thanks

[Zoya]

My pleasure

[ROXANE DORSEY]

This poem rolled off the top of my head. I didn't know so many would like it. Thanks! 10-20-17

[apennylate]

Baby, lady, oh steady hands and get wavy... Hah, loved this sh*t, just like karma loves to lay us in bricks... Better get a bungee cord before I hit earth... Thrillingly penned...

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for reviewing

[apennylate]

Of course, great stuff, thanks again for sharing