A PURE TASTE OF HONEY

My pure honey came from a bee.

Sweet as can be.

Not one bee, two or three but

thousands to pollinate your tree.

Perfume flowers lure the workers.

Each bee buzzes back and forth,

making sure the queen is rich in liquid

happiness.

No fussing, no fighting. Sticky work

fast as lightening.

Bees comes in swarms.  If provoked,

a black stinger you'll feel.  No 

telling how many points will get you

Mother Nature doesn't pay to 

taste her "B" juice!

Is the pain worth the pure taste 

of Honey?

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love your original & uninhibited ways of looking at the lives of bees . . . while also presenting an allegory about this magical "B" juice . . . it could be mojo, or love, or spiritual intensity . . . I love how this describes that eternal question about finding the elixir that does the trick. Your bee business is humming on all levels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Taylor]

This is very nice. I love how you talk about nature and nurture very true to their form. This is a very good piece. Very original and true to yourself. I truly felt this and it hit me straight in the chest, but i still loved its message. Thank you for this extraordinary piece. You are a true artist.

[Einstein Noodle]

AHAHAHHA GAVE ME A SWEET SMILE ON ME FACE HONEY GIRL ;) LOVE LOVE LOVE THE NATURE OF YOUR HONEY POEM!
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[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for the nice review and reading my poems.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Create visions and thoughts for the reader. I liked the question at the ending. Taste of honey is very tempting. Thank you Roxane for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Thanks for reading my poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Jiya]

Your writings are impeccable!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I am glad you enjoy'd my poetry.

[wordman]

ahh ! sounds like sweet nectar to me