Megan's Boyfriend

I used to date a girl on Habbo. She cheated on me. I wrote something dedicated to her new friend :/ Definitions: Pixel: A slang term for an avatar on Habbo

To Megan's boyfriend
I don't know who or what you are
But nonetheless you are an immoral piece of s**t
Take my woman and mentally wound my heart
With little concern on how that might feel to me

 

 

I know I shouldn't get attatched to a pixel
But she was so hard to resist
Not like the other girls
Has beauty on the inside
I insisted she was too good for me
Like a hobo winning the entire pot in a lottery
But still I feel as if this was real
I thought everything was good
But you jacked my girl
Like Niko Belic jacks a car off the street

 

 

She kicked me out of her life
As people do
Without saying goodbye
Or saying sorry
She just left me
Left me to die
Like when 50 cent got shot
I mean if an online breakup feels this bad
Imagine if this was real

So out of the blue she chose you
And rubbed it in my face like a sponge in the shower
So I hope you two have all the sadness and sorrow in the world.
So you can eventualy feel my pain
And when you die
I hope it's slow like an old lady
And painful like a hit to the head
And when this is all done
I hope you burn in hell like a victim of spontanous combustion

 

 

And besides
I should be looking for girls outside the internet
And hopefuly I could love her like I once loved Megan
But....Where is this future wife of mine?
I am getting teary asking myself that
But I'm only 16
It will happen
Destiny will reward me
And maybe then I could put all this behind me
But until then
Have a fucked up life you ungreatful little f****t!!!!!

Yours Truly, TUnit95Brah (My real name is classified)

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[RainQueen]

Wow. This was raw, and it was real. Online romance can be even tougher than "real," because you reveal yourself in pixels more than you do in the flesh. A weird intimacy you don't find in the day-to-day.

I love that you didn't sugar-coat. That you didn't make excuses for them or for how you feel. You captured that moment of rage perfectly. Please keep writing.

[Harmonica winds]

personal deep write. Profound language at the end. powerfully written.