Voices

Voices

A Poem by TTina

Living among these voices
So many opinions, so many choices
Stepping away from my fears
I can hear them clearer in my ears
Listening carefully what they are saying
It sounds as if they have no plans of staying
Overwhelming relief spreads trough my bones
I'm finally leaving all of my clones
Strangely, they felt relief as well
I got scared and started to yell:
"You should love me, you shouldn't want to leave!"
The voices got quiet in disbelieve
As I got scared all options appeared back
And stood there recovering from my mind's attack

© 2015 TTina


Author's Note

TTina
English is not my first language so sorry for any grammar mistakes.

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Your grammar seems better then mine, and I wan born in Australia.
Brilliant piece you are truly talented.
Your rhyming was just amazing, and it came naturally, doesn't feel forced.
The emotion, depth and meaning to this is great.
I loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 18, 2015
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TTina
TTina

Croatia



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