Hell's Interview

 

Accused of being late

 noses turned upward as she was

felt to be better than anything else

Spoken to harshly

sobs in gobs as sneers and jeers

mocked her in the hallowed shadows that

possessed extreme passionate putridicity

With pleas unable to find her knees

 she candidly spoke of her life and it was

the end that changed

A time

A moment

A second

 in her head that blurted feelings of hate

toward a cloudy sky

accompanied by brisk winds

and car splashes of non-discriminant taste

One moment

 that expelled all Bible study lessons

  and prayer meetings

One moment that someone

something heard her exclaim,

"Why today?"

About to render her sentence

 the serpent's tongue twisted when the

words,

 "Oh Heavenly Father, please forgive me

 I have been and always will be true to You"

were cast into the air

Illuminated was the figure like a puppet

 charged with a backup generator telling her

to stand a deliver

And with that

 The prayer was heard in the company of

His foe

No walk into a light

but a disintegration that quickly brought her back

whole

There her fearless escort arrived

 to take her to her true destination

Advising of another return for someone else

 who was accidentally dropped off

Her departure returned all to normal for the

 now slithering seething serpent so sullenly

stricken spitefully

Awaiting applicants failed to see her

 exit

despite hearing the next name called

 

Reviews

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. more power to you, dear poet, for this epic piece of writing ... the title ... the location ... the context ... the interviewee ... the profundity of your words ... and the flow of your thoughts ... and these lines especially ...

And with that
The prayer was heard in the company of
His foe
No walk into a light
but a disintegration that quickly brought her back
whole
There her fearless escort arrived
to take her to her true destination
Advising of another return for someone else
who was accidentally dropped off

. are all epic ... what an inspiration you are to any poet and true thinker, dear TTBoy ... amazing, just amazing ...

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow, intense, and telling, I enjoyed it very much :) Frank