Beautifully Beautiful with Life

I saw the moon float

right before my brown eyes

No birds sheltered it

Even the stars made their own skies

Steady was the wind

to not allow fallen seeds to offend

Somewhere up there

the Virgin Mary let down her hair with care

The little ones who came before me

showed no signs of fragility

Chirping along

were the angels in birds song

Flowers rested

full-breasted

And though rain was due

the Earth’s body tilled itself anew

Paradise reigned supreme

every day as if

and unlike any made up dream

When the sun winked

it stayed every time I blinked

Flowing waters played back-ups

and overflowed my ace of cups

Night favored the daylight

insuring its beauty with all its might

Accepting shade

for time and space that God had made

Reviews

[Kenzi Griffin]

As I am reading this, all I can think is how beautiful it sounds. But there is one part that completely stands out. "Every day as if". It doesn't have another rhyme to go with it like the other sentences do. But that's all I have to say. It's a beautiful poem and I absolutely love it :) Keep writing!