Let it Linger

Let it Linger

A Poem by TTBoy28

 

Walk by the pile

and add to it

Without clearing the way

you block your path

As conditions turn

by odor by movement

the pile reminds you of

what holds importance

Instead of walking through

stepping over becomes your

way out

So much stress added

unnecessarily

Time and energy now

later turns to immobility

changing the pep in the step

to a wheelchair that is unable

to move through what you let

build up

© 2010 TTBoy28


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. oh hell ... now i "get" it ... my english is atrocious but with a teacher like you ... there's hope ... :P ...

in those forests of
piles and piles and piles and piles
there's no room to move

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. oh gosh ... this is inspirational beyond measure ... i shall remember to ...

Walk by the pile
and add to it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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The truth shall set you free. I try to be adventurous. I am spontaneous. I love nature but love to write only about personal events. You can tell when something is made up. It could still sound g.. more..

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