I Used To Love You

 

When I didn't get enough of you

I moved to a more plush room

It gave me more comfort in case I

 fell and needed a softer landing

 

I'm still retrieving all of my clothes

 from the cleaners

All your make-up tear-filled stains

 saturated that part of my life

 

That was my first fall

 

My first taste that I could even love

 a crocodile

 

And now that I am free

I can pity you and gloat

 when your time comes

around

 

I can't believe that I used to love you

When most people fall due to finances

 we said, "Hello," to your numerous

fiancees

 

I guess, you should have done the

 spanking

The experiences lied and laid with you

 more than I could count

 

Liar

 

I whored myself for you

 and you blindsided me with an, "I'm sorry"

Making me feel like I just bought my own

  engagement ring

 

And now it's stuck

 

I used to love you

 And I want to cuss and flip you the bird

and kick you and spit

 on you

 

But it won't do any good

 because no matter what your now exes

 said to you to get you to come crawling back to me

I thank them for sending you back

 so you can hear me say, "Goodbye"

 

I've had enough

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

- - - I'm still retrieving all of my clothes
- - - from the cleaners
- - - All your make-up tear-filled stains
- - - saturated that part of my life

- - - Making me feel like I just bought my own
- - - engagement ring
- - - And now it's stuck

A truly impressive write. You wonderfully lead a revengeful and powerful pen.
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[Wondering Mind]

Well, Karma plays fair. A heartfelt write.. It reads well as spoken word form.

[Helen Woodward]

Never smile at a crocodile!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
My sentiments exactly TT...You go you good thing!!
Full marks for honest appraisal of a dishonest situation ...
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