I Took You Down

I Took You Down

A Poem by TTBoy28

 

I took you down

and I liked it

 

I tied your mind up in knots

and I can't forget it

 

You tried to yell, "Stop!"

But I stopped it

 

When you closed your eyes

I wanted them open

 

Because I'm the one who took you down

and I liked it

 

I caught you trying to break free

and I stopped you

 

I told you things to scare you

and I scared you

 

I made you tell me your fears

you did it with smile

 

I made you

then I took you down

© 2010 TTBoy28


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I told you things to scare you

and I scared you

This is just exquisite, amazing, wonderful, mind-shattering, brain-turning, and awesome in any way possible.. I'm not saying this because I'm you're friend but Whoa. Great write :))

Posted 14 Years Ago


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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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The truth shall set you free. I try to be adventurous. I am spontaneous. I love nature but love to write only about personal events. You can tell when something is made up. It could still sound g.. more..

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