The Girl Who Doesn't Need Makeup

The Girl Who Doesn't Need Makeup

A Poem by TTBoy28

 

It's such a shame

 She's even pretty with makeup

There's absolutely nothing we can do for her

 We can't fix her or tear her down

 She's simply and unequivocably flawless

Her parents must be ageless

Are there any more like her

Is it possible her looks were altered

No matter what she wears, it won't matter

 She'll only make it look better

You'd better not ask her to do anything

 It's obvious that she's just that snotty

And that darn laugh is just infectious

I hate her scream though

 She's can be so freakin' demanding

And her hands have never seen a hard day's work

She must be a trust fund baby

 So carefree yet finicky

Some people have all the luck

She doesn't even have to wipe her own butt

Some of the other girls in the room think two is over the hill

I just love her complexion

 

© 2010 TTBoy28


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beautiful... and so nicely described!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love how you describe that paradox of fascination and revulsion ...opposites attract ... i especially love the ending because one feels as if these musings are not completed, and that's a good thing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL A love HATE relationship!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

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