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What would it take

for you to take off your clothes

and bare your soul

spreading yourself so thin

thinking you would win

at the beck and call of another?

Would you do it again

and again

thinking that you'd begin

a trend

or mend

a kinship and then end

on a small or big screen

Doing things so obscene

and mean

that could demean

all reasoning

for a politically correct

place in society

What's it gonna be

or take for you to see

yourself screaming out pleas?

Heaven knows

that as the wind blows

you could just get down on your knees

 

Reviews

[Gracie-San]

Another great poem.

I love the rhyme scheme of it, and the message (I think) you're trying to portray. I also especially love the lines

"What would it take
for you to take off your clothes
and bare your soul
spreading yourself so thin
thinking you would win
at the beck and call of another?"

There's something so honest in it that's just fantastic.

P.S. I hate to be a grammar Nazi "obseen" should be spelled "obscene." :P

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

*applause*

[drave]

Interesting..while not a huge fan of traditional rhyme and meter,the subject matter gave it a depth it might not have attained otherwise.
On a side note..did you know that TT boy was a semi famous porn stars name?